Writing Mania

Saturday, June 11, 2005

One Guy!

I wrote this the other night for a particular guy that I like...

Your thoughts, your soul,
you yourself have become sacred,
I could cup your spirit
between hesitant, trembling hands,
and hold you close to my heart.

Can I talk of your brilliance
while painting in your vulnerability?
Oh, I'd walk the Inferno
to spend eternity with you.
God, I'm the fool,

but my thoughts have legitimacy;
carefully tended to by support,
lost before you, I know,
how I stumble over words-
sweet pain, leave me here...

I'm almost reluctant to post this here but I suppose in many ways it is accurate and well, it's the truth. The poem is titled with that certain guy's name but I didn't want to publish the details of my relationships on this blog but never mind, I hope everyone enjoys the coming week!

Yoomi

11 Comments:

  • Wow, that is beautiful and very touching....and honestly makes me feel sad.....

    Keep the poetry coming I say!!!

    By Blogger Anika From Darwin, at 12:29 AM  

  • thank you, thank you! Glad you liked it. I think that at the time, it was incredibly accurate, it said a lot that otherwise I'd just stumble when telling the 'someone.'

    Yoomi

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 12:01 AM  

  • Did you actually show the 'someone' the poem??

    By Blogger Anika From Darwin, at 3:52 PM  

  • I might do that...depends on how I feel at the time!

    Yoomi

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 3:40 AM  

  • Cute, I think he'd be very touched. I know I would be!!!

    By Blogger Anika From Darwin, at 8:25 PM  

  • very sweet...

    By Blogger Vidya, at 9:18 PM  

  • Thank you guys...Vidya, I'd say it's sweet too :P

    Yoomi

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 4:35 AM  

  • *ding ding*

    I'm ringing Vidya's update bell!!!

    By Blogger Anika From Darwin, at 8:05 PM  

  • ANIKA! I heareby patent that bell! :P

    By Blogger Vidya, at 11:14 PM  

  • Lol...guys, take it easy, I swear I'll update the minute I have time but I don't want to keep posting love poems here. Once I've got something to properly chat about, I'll update. And I solemnly swear that with my entire heart!

    Yoomi

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